Tactics and templates email outreach experts use
to receive more replies and grow their business.
And how you can do it, too!
MASTER THE ART
OF COLD EMAILING
WHO IS THIS EBOOK FOR?
Wondering what kind of templates and cold
email tips are waiting for you in this ebook?
This is the place where you’ll find out.
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JOURNEY TO A HIGH REPLY RATE
From building your funnel to setting up the
best outbound sequence, we go through all
the basics.
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SALES TEMPLATES
Cold email examples guaranteed to give your
revenue and conversation rates a boost.
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Table of contents
OUTBOUND SEQUENCES
3 great examples of outbound cadences that
you can easily adapt for your business.
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FOLLOW-UP EMAILS
Follow-ups you can send after meeting with
your prospects, conferences, etc.
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COLD EMAIL MARKETING
If you’re using cold emailing for networking,
collaborations and partnerships, this is the
perfect chapter for you.
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LINK BUILDING TEMPLATES
Building links for your website and articles?
Then check out these cold email templates.
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RECRUITING TEMPLATES
Email outreach can be a great opportunity to
connect with top talent for your business.
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INTRODUCTION
Who is this ebook for?
When you’re doing cold email outreach, you stumble upon all kinds of
challenges. Sometimes they are harder to solve, other times you take care
of them fast. Once you figure out one, inevitably, another one comes
knocking. These might include:
1) Low reply rates and negative ROI
2) No access to the world’s top-performing cold email templates to
take inspiration from
3) Wondering how many follow-up emails is too much
4) Low open rates and high bounce rates
5) Falling victim to spam filters and experiencing poor deliverability
6) Wondering whether your 10+ team needs a second domain just
for cold emailing
Whether you're just starting out or you already have a solid experience in
the cold email world, having a go-to resource packed with industry secrets,
best tactics and quality templates is something we’d all want to possess.
We sincerely hope this ebook will become that kind of a resource for you
and your team. In here, you’ll find years of email outreach experience
transformed into actionable tips and creme de la creme cold email
templates that scored high reply rates.
It doesn’t matter if you're a salesperson, work in marketing, are recruiting
talent, or trying to conquer link building. There’s something for every trade
and every outreach objective.
Whenever you feel stuck or when you stumble upon a roadblock, we hope
this ebook will be your Thor’s hammer so you can crack on.
Much love,
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The journey to a high reply rate
Every email outreach hacker is concerned with one thing and one thing
only - reply rates.
A high reply rate later transforms into your business objective. More leads,
booked demos, free trial signups, specific link clicks, generated backlinks,
or job applications.
But how do you get a high reply rate? We’ll present you with steps you
need to take for this journey to end with champagne. 🍾
Set up your email outreach funnel
Make sure prospects receive and read your emails
Invest time in researching your target audience
Crafting the perfect cold email sequence
Before we share our 27 cold email templates with you, we strongly
suggest you go through these four chapters first. They will give you the
necessary framework on top of which you can build your entire sales,
marketing, or any other funnel.
Plus, we kept them short and sweet, so it won’t take you ages to read
them.
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1. Set up your email outreach funnel
Your outreach funnel depends on the type of your business. I’ll give you an
example of how lemlist’s outbound sales strategy looks.
Send cold email sequence Generate a reply Book a meeting Free
trial (or move to paid conversion directly) → Paid Conversion
Whether a prospect goes through a free trial or becomes a customer
immediately depends on the type of a prospect and their needs.
Sometimes, you might have to run multiple meetings before converting
them. This is usually the case with bigger clients and enterprises.
But the main point is, the funnel’s framework remains intact. It just adjusts
to the prospect in question. Your mission is to figure out your funnel,
position cold email sequences in it accordingly, and keep improving it by
being data-oriented.
However, there are certain rules you ought to follow:
Sell the next step. For example, in their cold emails, our sales team
doesn’t bother with selling lemlist. Instead, they are focused on
booking a meeting first. It’s only at that meeting when they start
selling lemlist.
It’s about them. Eliminate “I” or “our company” from your vocabulary.
“You” and “your company” are things your prospects want to hear.
They don’t care about you. Your job is to figure out how they can win
so that you can too.
Intrigue, don’t promote. Your product feature is a solution to their
pain. Meaningless words are replaced with relevant examples.
Promotion goes away, empathy steps in. It’s through these trade-os
that you’ll get more replies.
Stop being generic. While automation helps you scale your business,
it can’t replace your understanding of the market. So, first understand
what makes your prospects tick, segment them into buckets (e.g.
across dierent pain points), and then start automating. Relevant
personalization and automation for repetitive tasks is the ideal match.
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1. Set up your email outreach funnel
The same rules apply to your follow-up emails. We’ll talk about specific tactics in a bit. But before we do, let’s finish this chapter with some targets you
should keep in mind and some funnels for inspiration.
Try not to send more than 100 emails per day
Your open rates should be above 50%
Your reply rates should be above 20%
From 100 emails sent, you should hit a 10% conversion rate (e.g. 10 meetings booked)
Don't worry if you're not there yet, that's what this ebook is for.
Here’s a quick visual example of an interesting funnel. Btw, working like fire for our team.
Target prospects
on LinkedIn
Cold email
outreach
Book a meeting
Conversion
Follow-up
sequence
Deliverable: segmented list KPIs: high open, click, and
reply rates
Deliverable: Qualified
meetings
KPI: Deals closed
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2. Make sure prospects read your emails
For a prospect to reply, they first have to receive your email and open it.
However, the fact of the matter is that a lot of cold emails end up in spam
or promotion folders. Meaning, prospects don’t even get a chance to read
the email in the first place.
This tends to happen more often to bigger sales teams where multiple
people are sending emails without following email deliverability rules. The
result is they ruin the domain’s reputation and suer from low open rates
and high bounce rates. We can illustrate the importance of email
deliverability through this image.
Here some typical and quite painful mistakes people make when sending
cold emails:
Use fake accounts and aliases. For example, when you’re setting up
your Gmail profile, input your correct details. Simply put, using fake
info is a bad idea in the long run.
Sending blasts fast. If you select an email marketing tool to send
your outreach campaigns, you’ll suer because email providers don’t
like to see thousands of emails sent at the same time. Punishments
for this are severe.
Forget to warm up their email address. Especially if you have a
new one. It needs to be warmed up. Meaning, you have to send and
receive emails initially so that email providers can see there’s a real
person behind the address. You can also automatically warm-up
your domain with lemwarm.
Second domain dilemma. Big sales teams wonder when and how to
set up a dedicated email domain just for cold email outreach. Our
advice is to go with a dedicated domain that doesn’t look scammy
because it’s extremely dicult to maintain a high email reputation
and eciently manage a bigger team.
Track metrics in the wrong way. Everybody wants to track opens
and clicks. But so many forget to set up their custom tracking
domain and are punished for it later.
All the answers on how to do an audit of your email reputation and
maximize email deliverability lie behind this link. And don’t worry, these
are super simple how-to tutorials to follow. Please set this up.
Your cold email future depends on it.
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3. Invest time to research your target audience
To be able to personalize cold emails, you have to know your target
audience. There’s no shortcut or quick automation that will help you do
this. You have to invest time and put the work in.
The better you know the person you’re about to reach out to, the easier it
will be to write the actual email. On top of that, the ROI you generate on
customer research is high reply rates. So it makes complete sense to do it.
The main objective is to look for patterns. If your product/service solves 3
specific pain points, I bet you’ll find three dierent types of prospects. You
can organize them into these 3 buckets.
For example, lemlist helps people get high reply rates, maximize
deliverability and engage with prospects across multiple channels. As a
result, this means I can organize prospects into 3 dierent campaigns and
pitch them accordingly. And because I know the patterns, I can automate
certain things or create templates for a specific bucket. How can you
understand your audience better? Luckily, there is an abundance of
resources available:
Communities. Facebook and Slack groups are big deals in today’s
world. Find relevant communities for your business and use the
internal search option for your analysis. Also, why not build your own
community and centralize feedback? :)
LinkedIn. A network we all love nowadays. Not only can you connect
with any prospect in a heartbeat, but its Search algorithm is vastly
powerful. Be sure to use it as all the information is already there.
Reddit/Quora/Product Hunt. People ask many intriguing questions
and leave interesting comments on things that matter in your
industry. Pay attention to them!
Google. Seeing how many people are searching for specific things
can help you confirm the demand. Any SEO tool out there will give
you even deeper insights into what drives clicks and what type of
content people consume.
Job ads. This is a brilliant hack our sales team uses. For example,
when we see that a certain company is looking for new sales reps to
join, we know that they are a potential customer to us. Plus, in most
of the job ads, we can identify what are the objectives they plan to hit
and what this person’s job description would entail.
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Don’t underestimate the power of good customer research. The markets are dynamic, competition is fierce and things change rapidly. The only way to stay
ahead of the curve is to be a few steps ahead. And it all starts by understanding your customers and then putting that information to good use.
3. Invest time to research your target audience
First Name Last Name Email Intro Line
Guillaume Moubeche [email protected]
You’re a big inspiration for me G and the way you
bootstrapped lemlist to where it is today is amazing. So I
thought to myself…I had to send you this email.
Vukasin Vukosavljevic [email protected]
I saw your recent LinkedIn post about marketers being more
data driven and how you measure things at lemlist. The
before/after image was awesome.
Briana Dilworth [email protected]
I saw that you joined lemlist’s marketing team recently and
wanted to congratulate you for it. Since we’re both content
creators, I have an idea to share that I think you’ll love.
This is a basic example of a .CSV file with which you can customize intro lines for every prospect. Something as simple as a Google Sheet can be your faithful
companion during research that you can later use to personalize cold emails. Plus, with this extension, you’re going to enjoy the process even more.
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4. Crafting the perfect cold email sequence
We have come to probably the most interesting part for anybody looking
to skyrocket their business through cold emails. What does a good cold
email sequence look like? More importantly, how do you dierentiate from
your competitors and motivate people to reply to you?
Let’s start from the top. A top-performing cold email sequence consists of
an opening email and follow-ups.
First cold email
For many outreach hackers, this is usually the best email in the entire
sequence. Its components are:
Subject line. The first thing you want to look out for is not to make it
too long because some people will check it out on their mobile
where you have less “real estate”. Up to 5-6 words is usually the
best. Then, treat it like a newspaper headline. It should intrigue
prospects, motivate them to open the email.
Intro line. This is where you break the ice and incentivize your
prospects to lower their guard down. Essentially, you want them to
read that intro and be like, “Ok, this is not a boring salesperson, let’s
see what they want''. This is achieved by using genuine
compliments or questions, common ground, and referencing things
of their interest.
Pitch. There are plenty of ways in which you can structure your
pitch. One of the examples is the PAIN - SOLUTION technique, where
you reference their most important pain and position your
product/service as a solution. Another way to do it is through an
empathetic example. Have you already done what they’re doing
now? Show them the magic and position your product/service along
the way.
Call-to-action. It should come naturally after your pitch. To find out
the one that works best, you have to test. But, don’t confuse
prospects with too many options. Don’t be pushy either. Fight
friction and don’t make them think too much. If what you’re saying
resonates with them, they should be able to book a call with you in
approximately 30 seconds.
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4. Crafting the perfect cold email sequence
If this seems intimidating, that's what our templates are for, keep reading
how these tips look in action
Follow-ups
The first thing people ask about follow-up emails is how many to send.
Along with how not to be boring and send those same types of “did you
read my last email” messages.
The strategy with follow-ups can be: 1) use well-structured reminders or 2)
storytelling.
When you’re reminding people, you need to understand the quality of
your first email. You do that by analyzing the results. For instance, did
people not reply because they forgot or because it could be better. If
you’re reminding them and you’re dealing with the latter, that won’t do the
job, would it?
It’s okay to reference the prior message, but try to repeat the most
important information in the follow-up. Make it sharp and write it in a
slightly dierent way.
If your strategy is storytelling, a good idea is to reveal one more gem with
every subsequent email. For example, in my first email, I can speak about
problems with email deliverability. But, in my follow up I can show you
how to fix them. The second follow-up can showcase a relevant use case
from your industry.
This strategy is great because it adds value with every additional email in
the sequence. The trick is to connect the dots and position it as a story.
How many follow-ups should you send?
A solid framework would look something like this:
2-day delay between email 1 and 2
2-day delay between email 2 and 3
3-day delay between email 3 and 4
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4. Crafting the perfect cold email sequence
Here’s an example of a schedule for 8-step cold email cadences.
2-day delay between email 1 and 2
2-day delay between email 2 and 3
3-day delay between email 3 and 4
3-day delay between email 4 and 5
4-day delay between email 5 and 6
6-day delay between email 6 and 7
8-day delay between email 7 and 8
But remember, there’s no golden rule or one-delay-fits-all schedules. The
right schedule will be the one that’s working best for you and your
audience, after you test it.
So send a few campaigns and analyze the performance.
How to make sure all emails in a sequence go under the same thread?
If you’re using lemlist to send your cold email campaigns, what you want
to do is leave the subject lines for follow-ups empty. That way, every email
will be delivered in the same thread.
Why should you send follow-ups?
Because they are guaranteed to bring more replies. And more replies bring
more opportunities. Think about it, sometimes people forget to reply or
have just been busy. Other times, their inbox could be filled with emails
and they haven’t got a chance to read it yet. Just because somebody
doesn’t reply immediately, it doesn’t mean they aren’t interested.
Ultimately, this is why we deliver follow-ups in the first place.
Advanced email outreach tactics
One more thing before we move onto cold email templates. Prepare to
discover 5 high-performing outreach tactics that will ramp up your reply
rates.
Capturing prospects’ attention with images
An image in a cold email can mean so many fantastic things. We can be
talking about:
Unique video thumbnail customized for every prospect
Screenshot of their LinkedIn profile
Screenshot of their website
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In the example you see above, this custom video thumbnail outperformed
every text link there is. It’s a brilliant way to have prospects click on a link
you want. Why? Because it’s tailored to an individual, like a suit or a dress.
A piece of clothing that’s been specially designed for you always feels
best, right?
This is what personalized images are able to do for your cold email
campaigns. If you fit them into your email and make them relevant to the
prospect, you’ll be amazed.
Plus, you can create them at scale, like this.
Dynamic landing pages
To continue from the previous section, imagine people clicking on your
video thumbnail. Where will you take them once they click?
Imagine that prospects land on a page that’s uniquely customized for
them. Relevant text, their company logo, and your video embedded. Let’s
also say that your goal is to book a meeting. You then also embed your
Calendly below the video to reduce friction and have people book that
meeting with minimum clicks.
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4. Crafting the perfect cold email sequence
If you think about it, this is a great outreach funnel to have. You can use it
to book meetings, promote events, connect with your network, recruit,
apply for a job, etc. Oh, and you don’t have to imagine it. lemlist gives you
a no-code way to create these pages in seconds, like this.
Personalized text
Tailoring your email with text-only content is also a great way to stand out.
With something simple as a well-structured CSV file, you can do wonders.
Everything you see in red columns is for internal use only, while the blue
labels tell me what’s going into my email.
By doing so, I’m creating unique sentences in my CSV, while doing the
customer research. With custom tags, lemlist will place all the content in
the right place.
Meaning all I have to do in my cold email then is to add {{Tiramisu1}}
instead of my intro line, and {{Tiramisu2}} instead of my pitch sentence.
Everything else is done on autopilot.
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A/B testing
Now let’s imagine two dierent scenarios.
The first one is you’re in a room with your boss and the rest of the team.
Together, you’re trying to decide what the best subject line is for an
important outbound campaign you’re about to send. There are two choices
in the mix. An hour later, the decision is made.
Here’s the second option. Instead of debating which subject line is better,
you let the audience tell you. You split the entire list into two buckets and
send it. Instead of an hour, you spend 10 minutes explaining the move to
the team.
Tell me, honestly, which scenario would you rather be in?
This is what A/B testing is for. To save you time and protect your company
from subjective opinions. Whether we’re talking about subject lines, intro
lines, images, image vs. text, two dierent sequences, you can A/B test
anything.
Things you can A/B test:
1) Subject lines
2) Intro lines
3) Call-to-actions
4) Entire sequences
5) Formal vs. informal approach
6) More vs. less follow-up emails
7) Personalized images vs. personalized text
8) Dynamic landing pages vs. personalized text
9) One-channel vs. multi-channel approach
Opportunities are endless.
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SALES TEMPLATES
Schedule a meeting in style
If this resonates, let me know. I will be happy to
chat over coee.
Take care,
Nadja
Subject line: Thanks for the ebook Stephen
Hey Stephen,
The ebook you've shared on building a
marketing plan was spot on. Loved the highlight
it puts on the impact of proper messaging and
how easily it gets overlooked.
You wore many hats in your career, from social
marketing to enterprise sales, so you're surely
aware of the importance personalization and
proper messaging has in cold outbound.
Hell, you wouldn't be able to lead 4 companies
to successful exits without it.
I'm curious to know if you have something in
place to help your team practice what you
preach and ensure they're eciently leveraging
personalization in their cold emails?
Research! Nadja’s campaign was full of
information about each lead to grab their
attention from the start.
She starts out with the intro that is 100%
centered around them and shows the
proof behind her statements.
Then she asks a question that opens up a
conversation without sounding too pushy
and ties this in with her CTA to meet for
coee. And of course she adds a finishing
touch of the coee cup image to seal the
deal.
Centering her email around her leads and
adding a human touch is what led this
campaign to its success!
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sent
80%
open rate
23%
reply rate
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Research tip
It seems like this might require a lot of research when you are doing
it for a large number of leads. But, it doesn’t have to be! Instead of
sending 1000 emails a week, send 100-200, and really try to qualify
your prospects and research them accordingly. You will be amazed
at how much you can learn from their LinkedIn posts, a blog article
they wrote, or a podcast they did somewhere. Your job is not to send
the highest amount of emails, but to close as much as you can. The
better the research is, the higher your conversion rate will be.
Custom tags
Let’s imagine you want to have a custom intro sentence and a
custom call-to-action for every prospect. In your CSV file, add two
columns - “intro line” and “call to action”. Then, for every prospect,
add appropriate content when you’re researching. Finally, go to
your cold email tool (preferably lemlist :P), and create a template. In
the intro section add {{intro line}} and later {{call to action}} tags.
That way, your cold email tool will automatically pull the right
content for you. A simple text personalization that does wonders.
Coee cup image
You probably saw that it says Stephen on the coee cup Nadja
is holding. That’s the {{first name}} tag that dynamically updates
for each prospect in your email list. Plus, it also shows that you
are a real human being, makes the email feel warm, and allows
you to showcase your personality. That way, you’re building a
relationship with your prospect, which is what sales is
ultimately all about. If you’re curious how you can create this
coee cup image, take a look at this.
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How can you use this?
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Take this needle out of my back
Subject line: Your emails going to spam? Do this
Hey Jackie,
I noticed yesterday's conversation around email deliverability in the Cold Email
Closers community. Your comment caught my attention, but don't worry, I
come in peace. :)
In the past two months, my team went from 3 to 8 people, with everybody
sending outbound campaigns. It hit our deliverability hard, so I faced the same
challenge you're facing right now. But, there are a few things you can do to fix
it and keep your open rates at 50%+. Let me show you…
Hit me up, just a chat,
Vuk
This cold email starts o with a relevant subject line that the
prospects see in a timely fashion. For example, this prospect
expressed spam concerns in the “Cold Email Closers” community
on Facebook, so Vuk was quick to reach out afterward and the
subject line helped capture the prospect’s eye. Because it speaks
to their “urgent” need.
The intro line referenced the subject line and that community
post to set the expectation straight and to showcase you’re not
entering someone’s inbox guns blazing.
As the Head of Growth at lemlist, Vuk is obviously selling a cold
email tool that also helps maximize email deliverability. But in
this case, he’s doing it in a credible and empathetic way by
connecting with prospects first. By doing so, he shows his
prospect that he solved that pain in the past.
The gold in this email is in the personalized thumbnail. Instead of
sending an article or using words to explain it, Vuk decided to go
with a video outlining how he fixed the situation. Why? Because
it brings value to people. Plus, every image is unique to the
prospect in question and it grabs their attention right o the bat.
On top of it, it also opens a window for Vuk to showcase his
personality and position lemlist as the go-to solution.
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sent
83%
open rate
32%
reply rate
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How can you use this?
Customer research
You can see that even the subject line mentions the problem the lead
is facing and how it can be fixed. This sets the expectation perfectly
on top which you can elaborate and build a story in the email. Plus,
these are all qualified leads for your business. How do you find
them? By looking at groups on Facebook, Slack, LinkedIn, or even
things like Clubhouse, Quora, or Reddit. You can also leverage
LinkedIn and its robust search engine to check out their latest activity
to see if they have mentioned anything in their posts or comments.
Find out where your audience is spending time online and go to the
source.
Connect with their problems
You can either establish how you’ve fixed the problem in the past
or just state the challenge and walk them through the solution. In
either case, be sure to add real proof! Using both of these
methods you still want to position yourself as helping them solve
their problem, but not about selling your specific solution. Your
objective is to create a story of some sort and help them connect
with it. The more they connect, the better.
Personalized video to seal the deal
Now it’s time for the cherry on top, the video. In this video, you’ll
want to showcase one of the suggestions you have to solve
their problem and give a link to your product. You can use Loom
or Vidyard (or anything else really) to do a quick screen share
video and walk people through a deck or live example. It doesn’t
have to be perfectly edited, but it should be valuable and
actionable. And the personalized thumbnail in the email helps
you boost clicks and get them to open the video. This is how you
can create it at scale, so it dynamically updates for every
prospect in your list.
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Job ads outreach tactic
Subject line: Your hunt for an SDR at Pipedrive
Hey Jack,
I saw on ReveGenius that you're looking for new SDRs for Pipedrive to help you
out with ABM campaigns and support you in this exciting stage of your growth
after a new round of funding.
Given you rank top 25 for the workplace environment, I am sure you'll find a
candidate in no time! I'm curious - given your aim to stay away from the spray
and pray approach and put emphasis on quality over quantity in your outreach,
do you have a tool in place to help new hires cut some time and automate
cross-channel prospecting whilst still maintaining that much-needed personal
touch.
I'd love to run an idea by you on how your hires can conduct personalized
outreach to enterprize employers across emails + LinkedIn + calls in an
automated way and get them to drive down the cost of business-critical training
with Pipedrive.
Would you be open to hearing more about it?
Nadja
This cold email campaign is super special and it
performs like crazy for lemlist’s Head of Business
Development, Nadja.
What’s special about it is the method she uses to
qualify prospects. Nadja goes to websites like Indeed to
see which companies are hiring Sales VPs or SDRs,
because it’s highly likely these prospects need a good
outbound sales solution like lemlist.
She uses the intro line of her email to get straight to the
point, be relevant, and show that she’s paying
attention. Then, before jumping into sales, she aims to
establish a real rapport first by paying them a genuine
compliment.
It’s only after all that the conversation moves to
identifying the challenge and talking outbound. What’s
interesting about the call-to-action here is that Nadja
positioned it to sound exciting to the prospect, thus
boosting her reply rate.
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sent
71%
open rate
50%
reply rate
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Go to the source
Qualifying prospects can be time-consuming and sometimes
hard. But if you figure out where some extent of information
is already stored online, you will identify a useful shortcut,
without sacrificing quality. For Nadja’s team, this shortcut is
a job ad, but for your business it can be many other things
like their LinkedIn profile, website, or other social media
activity.
Genuine compliments
If you decide to extend someone a compliment, make sure
you mean it. Saying something generic or insincere will do
your more harm than good. Compliments that you can back
up represent a beautiful way to start a business
relationship.
Conversational call-to-actions
Sometimes, the best CTA doesn’t have to be your
Calendly URL or a dedicated landing page. A simple
invitation to a quality chat and exchange of tactics can do
the trick. Especially if you have a strong personal brand
behind your LinkedIn profile or your company’s logo.
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Identifying decision-makers
Subject line: Ron recommended I get in touch with you
Hi Jeremy,
Hope nothing but the finest things are happening at Spendesk.
I'm looking to get in touch with the person who handles Spendesk's outreach
campaigns. As a fellow Head of Growth, I'm guessing you are the right person
to talk to. Here's why I'm asking.
I watched your interview on The Family podcast and it was quite interesting
when you guys started talking about the dynamics of your events, community
and how you're planning to transform CFO Connect champions into Spendesk
users.
It got me thinking and researching your cold email work.
I'd love to hop on a call with you (or someone else) to talk more about this (link).
Trust me, as one outreach player to another, you're gonna love it once you click.
You interested?
Vuk
This template was so successful because of its
personalization, and because you are asking them to
verify they are the right person to be in contact with.
In this case, Vuk used custom variables to add
information about the company and verify that this
lead is in fact the right person to reach out to. Then he
drops some well-researched information about this
specific lead.
Finally, he finished with a simple yes/no question that
is sure to boost response rates!
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Transition and pitch
In this example, Vuk decided to intrigue prospects and hook
them to open his link, where he would later go in-depth on a
specific tactic. But, in the bigger picture, once you reference
your research in the previous section, it becomes easier to
make the transition. Reference is how you set the stage,
pitch is where you oer something exciting.
Reference your research
If you discover something interesting online, make sure to
reference this research point in your cold email. The
prospect needs to connect the dots about what you’re
saying, plus it shows that you are the type of person that
does their homework.
When to use this template
You can use the “decision maker” template either as the
first email to verify you are talking to the right person or
as a follow-up to people who haven’t responded.
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Show them the promised land
I want to be the person that will help you take
over the throne, while also ramping up your
sales.
Here’s a quick plan overview (link) I suggest
so you know I mean business.
I’d love to hop on a call with you and talk
about everything in more detail.
Let me know if you're interested.
Have a good one,
Ilya
Subject line: Caeine Atlanta, the king of
Atlanta
Hi Sarah,
I'm a caeine addict, sipping my second
double espresso today and it's only 11 am.
I recently googled “best coee shops in
Atlanta” and noticed your competitors are
ranking higher than Caeine Atlanta.
This email starts out with an icebreaker
that is personalized for every lead’s
business. It helps tone down your sales
intentions and focus on starting a
conversation on a topic that’s relevant to
your prospect.
When transitioning to the sales pitch, this
email captures interest by mentioning
how the lead compares to their
competitors on Google, complete with a
personalized image.
Then it shows them the promised land by
explaining how they can put their coee
shop on top and even links a plan so they
know he is serious.
It finishes with a CTA that clearly states
the next steps, a call, and asks if they are
interested with a Yes/No, which can boost
response rates!
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Help prospects visualize success
In this example, we can see that the email is playing on the
competitive nature of prospects and something that’s really
relevant for their business. If somebody searches for “best
coee in Atlanta” their business needs to be there with great
reviews to show. What’s the moral of the story here? Figure
out what the main factors are influencing purchasing
decisions in a market and then visualize what you can for
prospects to help them succeed.
Polite call-to-actions
A gentle(wo)man’s code suggests that you shouldn’t go
all-in on sales before your prospect expresses interest.
Once you qualify them and there’s a fit, go all-in by all
means.
Conversational intro lines
When starting an email, you can use an icebreaker that
connects to the lead’s work and at the same time shows
why you are a good fit to work with them. Then explain
where you got the info from above, mention one of their
competitors, and of course top it o with the customized
image. Thankfully you can input all of this info into a CSV
and lemlist will take care of the rest! A good intro line can
be a genuine compliment, a common ground, or a
reference to something they did in the past. Even humor,
if the situation allows for it.
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Network your way to sales
Subject line: Coee or tea? Hello Eva!
I saw your growthmaker podcast on how you onboard your SDRs, super
interesting! I just started working at lemlist and I’d be delighted to talk to you
about your vision of the outbound & automation sector.
There are so many topics to cover, so all the tips are good to take in my opinion.
😅
I have worked in several startups and dierent teams, so I too have a lot to
share with you!
Would you like a 15-minute call on Zoom?
-> Here for the
-> Here for the 🍵
P.S. - Yes, I'm doing a little study on the subject "Are you more into tea or
coee?" for my next Linkedin post. 😁
Clémence F.
B2B Outbound Sales Automation Expert @lemlist
Clémence starts right o the bat with a personalization tag
that shows she did her research before reaching out to
this lead. This will immediately grab their attention
because let’s face it, who doesn’t like reading compliments
about their work?
Then she establishes who she is, and why this is
interesting for her lead. In networking emails, it’s always
important to establish your credibility without making it
seem like you are bragging. Clémence did this beautifully
by simply mentioning her previous experience, and how
this can help the lead.
She goes in with an easy yes/no question with a link to
her calendar so they don’t even have to respond, and adds
a funny twist to this by putting options for a coee and
tea meet-up. This adds a human touch to her email that
sets it apart from all the other automated emails in her
lead’s inbox. This is sure to boost her click and response
rates!
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reply rate
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Add humor
“Coee or tea” dilemma is such a nice touch that makes
the conversation feel human and pleasant. Plus, it lowers
the prospect’s guard and tones down the sales side of the
email. Always be on the lookout for how you can make
your email outreach feel more like a conversation, so that
replying comes naturally.
Establish credibility smoothly
You don’t need to name drop, mention all the awards
you’ve gotten, or publications you’ve been cited in. Keep it
simple and human by just adding a short credibility
statement so they know you are serious.
Grow your network
After adding a personalized intro sentence for every
prospect, the rest of Clémence’s template focuses on
establishing a connection. If your email copy delivers on a
promise to have a quality conversation when you meet,
not only can you smoothly position your product/service,
but you can also have a valuable exchange and
potentially develop great professional connections along
the way.
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OUTBOUND SEQUENCES
Multichannel outbound cadence
The first cold email sequence we’re going to analyze is from one of lemlist’s
B2B sales experts, Simon. It’s very interesting because it leverages a
multichannel approach. Here’s what it looks like:
1. Establish a connection on LinkedIn
2. Send a cold email
3. Hop on a cold call
4. Follow-up email
In the first step, Simon’s goal is to do simple things. Connect on LinkedIn
and send them a light intro message. Don’t be sales-y, but focus on
starting a conversation on a topic that interests you both. Also, don't send
all connection requests or emails on the same day. Spread it across a
specific period of time and respect LinkedIn limits.
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2nd email in the cadence
If a prospect doesn’t reply, that’s when a cold email is fired
o. As you can see, this message is a pretty
straightforward email. However, the second paragraph
contains a unique sentence for the prospect that’s pulled
through the CSV file Simon previously prepared.
Also, the call-to-action is structured as an invitation to talk
about sales and ambitious objectives, rather than directly
asking for a meeting to be booked. He is patiently moving
prospects through dierent stages of interest without
making it obvious.
The third step is the cold call. Thanks to good research
before reaching out, Simon came prepared. He went to the
Welcome To The Jungle job board and assessed whether
prospects are expanding their sales teams and determined
the objectives they wanted to hit. By knowing what his
prospects are aiming to do, Simon can navigate the
conversation accordingly.
Subject line: Outreach question, Nadja
Hey Nadja,
I tried to reach you on LinkedIn the day before yesterday without
success! (I suspect your agenda is full so I’m trying my luck here)
As I told you, I recently found out about what you’ve accomplished
with the Miro team, your fundraising in particular. Bravo to you 🙌
I’m very curious to know what you have in place in terms of
outreach to get there? Is there an axis that you’re exploring at
Miro?
Talk soon,
Simon
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Multichannel outbound cadence
But, going back to dierent stages of the prospect’s interest, the
goal of a call is to book a Zoom meeting. So these calls are short
and sweet. As a matter of fact, Simon starts the call using this
sentence "I totally understand you're busy, all I need is 24 seconds
to explain my point. Do you have 24 seconds?". That way, not only
does he capture the prospect's attention but he also plays on the
prospect’s biggest needs. Most importantly, he sells the meeting,
not the product.
The final step is the follow-up email that gets delivered if the
person doesn’t respond to the cold call. The goal is to squeeze in
additional replies from people who were just too busy and weren’t
able to reply before. The email begins with a unique intro line for
every lead and then leverages the personalized video thumbnail
tactic we talked about earlier in this ebook.
But to do a quick recap of this image one more time, it consists of:
a) Simon's image so people can see the real person, b) dynamic
text with {{firstName}} tag, c) LinkedIn profile pic of the person, d)
company logo in the bottom left corner and e) play button. This
way, your click rate is maximized, while people are moved to a
dynamic landing page. What’s special about that?
It’s a custom page that's tailored for every lead individually, while
the most important things are embedded on it - dynamic text,
video, and your Calendly URL to decrease friction. This is one of the
finest ways to book meetings and be dierent in a very noisy world
of cold email outreach. Here’s a quick tutorial on how you can
create one for your business without writing a single line of code.
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Multichannel outbound cadence
Subject line: *same as the previous email
I tried to reach you yesterday by phone without
success
I also just realized that I asked you a few
questions, but I didn't take the time to introduce
myself...Rather than writing you a long block, I
shot a little video for you that you can watch by
clicking on the thumbnail.
Learn how to use this strategy to increase your conversion rate.
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open rate
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reply rate
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Reference the last step in a smart way
Simon always makes a reference to the previous step - "I
emailed you two days ago..." and never lets too much time
pass between steps. Two-days in between is the maximum.
Cold call tips
The call always goes in the middle of the sequence for
maximum impact. Prior to calling, list all the numbers
before. That way, you’ll stay sharp and manage to average
20 calls an hour.
Call with one click
Thanks to the integration between Aircall and lemlist,
Simon is able to have all prospects in one clean list and
call them in seconds right from the lemlist app.
Multichannel sequences all without leaving lemlist.
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Convert inbound leads to clients (email 1)
Why did this template work?
This email starts out with an icebreaker
that is personalized for every lead’s
business. It helps tune down your sales
intentions and focus on starting a
conversation on a topic that’s relevant
to your prospect.
When transitioning to the sales pitch,
this email captures interest by
mentioning how the lead compares to
their competitors on Google, complete
with a personalized image.
Then it shows them the promised land
by explaining how they can put their
coee shop on top and even links a
plan so they know he is serious.
It finishes with a CTA that clearly states
the next steps, a call, and asks if they
are interested with a Yes/No, which can
boost response rates!
Subject line: Hi Helen, I've saved your video! 🤗
Hi, Helen 👋
I want to thank you for signing up, and I hope you attended our Tech
Recruitment course.
I believe you now know Recrooit (and the team behind it) a little better.
The time has come for us to get to know you better and to push your
career forward together.
I have prepared a short video for you:
or click here.
Our mission is to connect with talent hunters who:
- They want to absorb knowledge and gain experience
- They strive for a job that will fulfill them, but not take away
all their time
- They love everything that contains a "tech" moment
We would oer you:
- Training videos
- Tips on recruiting practices (from writing ads, to folk
remedies for headaches from LinkedIn)
- Bonuses (fees, bounties, call them whatever you want, but
$$$) + list of interesting clients
- Opportunity to break through and (hear) about your abilities
- Access to the huge network we are building in Serbia and far
beyond
Now, perhaps the best part of the package - there are no
restrictions or classic deadlines. Apply and recommend
someone for a job whenever you want, and earn cash benefits
and most importantly - experience.
Let me know how you feel about the video and I'm waiting for
you on Recrooit 👉 https://recrooit.com/signup
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Subject line: *same as the previous email
Hi Helen,
I believe you are in a hurry, so I wanted to check my impressions
once again.
I hope that the video answers the questions, and that it is clearer
to you how our platform works. I would definitely like to hear
feedback about the course, and I'm looking forward to your
answer.
In the next two weeks, we will occasionally send additional
materials, so keep an eye on the inbox.
There’s nothing better when marketing and sales teams work together
to build a funnel that converts great leads for your business. One such
example comes from Nevena, Founder of Recrooit, who managed to
convert 13% of her webinar attendees.
It all started with an educational webinar marketed to the relevant
audience. This is great top-of-the-funnel content that brings value to the
audience. The majority of their webinar was also about providing value,
but a piece of it was also positioning Recrooit in that narrative.
The beauty of the follow-up email they’ve sent was that it’s closely
related to what they were saying during the webinar. There, they’ve
shown them the value behind the product and actionable tactics to
succeed in recruiting. It wasn’t sales-y, it was how they can use it to
make wins in their job. This email is a simple recap of that message and
it comes with a unique video for them too. When you connect inbound
and sales in a meaningful way, magic happens.
The follow-up that comes if they don’t sign up is a simple reminder to
boost replies. Sometimes your leads are busy at the moment they
receive an email or simply forget and this is why follow-up emails are so
important, to help you increase the reply rate.
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Top of the funnel content
It’s always topically related, but there’s never purchase intent.
You’re in the business of grabbing your target audience’s
attention and delivering them something of value. If you do
that, you open this amazing marketing flywheel that results
in amazing virality and word-of-mouth.
More follow-up email ideas
Besides sending reminders, you can create your sequence in
a way for every subsequent email to bring more value. If you
decide to take this route, make sure your entire sequence
tells the same story so that prospects can connect the dots
easily.
Videos in cold emails
Doing a video for every prospect individually is hard. But,
there’s a way to accomplish the same eect and have
scalability by your side as well. Divide your prospects into
segments. Pain points are a great example of how you
can segment. Imagine having 3 pain points that your
product/service is solving. Each prospect will be assigned
to the right “pain pointbucket and get the right video in
the email. And you record 3 videos in total. Scale + smarts
+ personalization = win-win!
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A simple 3-step sequence
Subject line: *same as previous email
Hi again Tim,
I hope my mail finds you in good health.
I am managing teams of Financial
Managers in dierent industries, and my
experience taught me that it’s less risky
for an enterprise to outsource the
project to a pre-validated team. I could
oer you a call with pre-validated
groups of Financial Managers. Would
you like to have a call about it?
Robert
Subject line: Is Apple company in
need for Financial Managers?
Hello Tim,
I saw on Glassdoor that Apple is
looking to increase their team. I am
super interested in projects that
require Financial Managers. Could
you please elaborate a bit more
about the project itself?
Robert
When you understand the challenges your
prospects are facing, not only does this help
you write a great cold email sequence, but it
sets you miles apart from your competition
and helps you stand out in any inbox.
Robert’s campaign is a great example of how
each email in the sequence builds on another.
In the initial step, the objective is to start a
conversation based on a simple Glassdoor ad.
There’s not much content in it and Robert
doesn’t go into details yet, which is a good
idea if you’re looking to open up a
conversation.
In the first follow-up, things change. Because
these prospects haven’t replied, Robert
decides to reveal more details and show his
cards. He speaks directly to prospects’ needs
and oers them another solution.
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open rate
17%
reply rate
Step one email Step two email
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A simple 3-step sequence
Subject line: *same as in the previous email
Hi Tim,
I have some teams of Financial Managers that are on hold right now. Will
you be interested to hear how you can outsource Apple's project to a
pre-validated team of Financial Managers?
112Hub is assuring matchmaking of pre-validated teams with ambitious
projects for enterprises from all over the world. We do this in 3 ways:
By outsourcing the project to one of our suppliers (out of a list of
52 companies from East Europe)
By building a team of developers here in Romania for our client
By helping the client to merge or buy a software company in East
Europe
I can present to you those alternatives and see exactly which one fits your
needs. Please let me know when you would be available for a video call.
Finally, in the last email in his sequence, there are even
more insights and options for the prospect. But if we go
back to the first sentence in this section, the key asset
here is intel and your understanding of the market. If
you know that the solutions you oer bring results to
your clients and you present them at the right moment,
you will win.
On top of that, people in big companies have packed
calendars. Precisely why you want to have multiple
follow-ups in your sequence. But don’t just repeat
yourself or ask things like “Did you see my previous
email?”
Instead, make sure that every email on its own can tell
the prospect everything they need to know to decide
whether they want to respond or not, but position them
in a dierent way. In his example, Robert opted to be
more concrete with every additional message.
Step three email
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Have all emails land in the same thread
If you’re sending cold email campaigns with lemlist, keep
your subject lines in the follow-up emails empty. That way,
all your emails are delivered in one thread and your subject
line stays the same from the first email to the last one.
Simple text personalization
Straightforward custom tags in your CSV file can help you
be more ecient in your email outreach. For instance,
Robert was switching “job positions” through his custom
tags since he had prospects hiring for dierent positions.
More outreach content ideas
For example, you can start by connecting based on a
common interest, like how your prospect uses LinkedIn. Of
course, pick a topic connected with your product/service.
Then, if you get no response, tell them a story about how
you have already faced the pain/challenge they are
experiencing now. Finally, add relevant and actionable
examples in the third email, walk them through the tactics,
and position yourself as an expert on the subject.
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FOLLOW-UP TEMPLATES
Follow up after a meeting
CHALLENGES:
Qualifying leads prior to
reaching out to them
Reporting across multiple
channels
GAME PLAN:
Set up lemlist account and test
sequence
Address lead qualification &
share best practices
Take care,
Simon
Subject line: As promised Frank
Hey again Frank,
Great talking to you today. As
promised, I'm sending you a quick
summary of our conversation.
Let me if it's all good or I forgot
something?
NEXT STEPS:
We’re going to organize one more
meeting with John and Sarah
Next Tuesday at 5pm, we’ll focus
on multi-channel sequence setup
In this case, the follow-up was directly
following a meeting, and talked about the
next steps, the most important topics that
were discussed, and ended with a game plan
for how to proceed.
This is a template inspired by the one we
received from Richard Harris, a world-famous
sales expert. As you can see in the bullet
points, they are organized across three
categories to make sure both parties are on
the same page when it comes to what
happens next.
The key to success when it comes to
follow-ups after meetings is to processize it
and ensure it gets delivered in a timely
fashion.
The rest is up to you to sell in the meeting!
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93%
open rate
73%
reply rate
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Mention key points of the meeting
If you want to summarize your meeting, you don’t only
have to use the same headings. For instance, if you were
following up after a qualifying call you could replace these
with “your pain points” and “features that will help you the
most”, and then end with the next steps. Adjust the
template to your and your audience’s needs.
Send a meeting summary
In this case, it was a summary of the meeting, but you can
also send a simple follow-up that says you were happy to
chat and mentions the next step. This will depend on your
goal for the email and what your next steps are!
Be ecient
Sending notes after a meeting doesn’t need to be time
consuming! What you can do is connect your lemlist
account with a Google Sheet. Create a template in lemlist
and set it up so every bullet point is a custom tag. Then,
as soon as you finish a meeting, go to your CSV file and
add that lead in the Sheet. Once done, it will
automatically go to your lemlist campaign.
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Follow up after a conference
This follow-up worked wonders for Briana after
attending a conference because it reminds the lead of
shared experiences, and delivers on something they
previously discussed.
By using specific stories in the custom variables for her
lead she was able to make this automated email seem
like it was 100% handwritten.
She had already planted the seed at the conference,
mentioning the topic. Then she goes in with the follow
up delivering what she promised, and even ties in this
information with her company.
The casual tone and personalization are what really set
this email apart and led Briana to the responses she
got!
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91%
open rate
43%
reply rate
Subject line: Following up on our discussion at Growth Marketing
Conference
Hey Denis,
I’m so happy we got a chance to connect at the Growth Marketing
Conference. I got a lot from our conversation about what’s wrong with
content in 2020, specifically the problems you were facing with creating
top-of-the-funnel content that hooks the lead without a hard sell.
As promised, I wanted to share some of my best tactics with you that helped
me generate amazing organic growth.
Here is the link, go to town!
I haven’t sent this around yet so let me know what you think, I hope it helps
with your content game
Let me know when you have 15 minutes for a coee break so we can catch
up.
Nothing but the best,
Briana
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Make the most out of relationships
You can use this follow-up how Briana did after a conference,
or it can also be following a networking event, alumni event,
etc. These all work because you will have already built a
relationship with your lead and can use that to personalize
your messages and connect with leads.
Deliver your message with a custom video
These are always crowd-pleasers and will increase your click
rates. Especially in cases where you already have met your
lead, it might be nice to say hello and ask how they are and
then go in and explain the content you are sending them.
Modify custom variables to your audience
You can keep the info in your custom variables
professional like Briana does, or add something a bit
more personal. Especially during conferences, you tend to
get to know people outside of their work environment.
Don’t hesitate to mention that. For example, if you did a
little shop talk during the conference and found out some
of their pain points, don’t be afraid to mention that and
give them your solution! The key is to match your lead
with the right information and you’ll be sure to get
replies.
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Follow up after no response
It looks like we have a lot of similar
marketing experiences!
I'd love to pick your brain about how
you’ve managed a team distantly and I'd
be happy to also share my experience
working with an international team.
Does Thursday afternoon work for you?
Just let me know or see my calendar here
:)
Chat soon,
Iryna
Subject line: *same as previous email
Hey Roxana,
I sent you an email a few days ago but I'm
not sure if you have received it.
In any case, I would love to chat and hear
about your experiences as a remote growth
team leader.
Are you free for a coee?
This variation of the coee template is
always a winner! Why? It combines the
two best things: personalization, and
humor.
This follow-up references the first step of
the sequence where Iryna sent an invite
for coee with the same picture, but with
“Coee {{firstName}}?” and the cup facing
up.
Reversing the image adds a bit of humor
to the email, while also kindly reminding
the lead of the first email she sent.
Then she continues by re-inviting them to
the meeting and giving a specific time
frame so the lead can determine if that
works for them. Then she even adds the
link to his calendar so all they have to do
is book it.
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100%
open rate
60%
reply rate
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Don’t forget, there is money in follow-ups
Especially when you are using templates like this one. Like
we said, this template is always a winner, just look at that
response rate! This email got 60% more responses than if
they had only sent the first email. You can duplicate these
results with your own sequences by following up with a
related and funny theme.
Include the key point of the previous email
When writing a follow up you want to make it as easy as
possible for your lead to get through without having to go
back and read previous emails. That’s why in this case they
reminded them of the previous email but summarized the
main point, to meet for coee, so that the lead could
immediately respond without sifting through emails.
Use personalized images or videos
To play o what you talked about in the first email you
can use a reverse image like in this template, or you can
even take advantage of the follow-up to add a video
that sells the value to your lead! If you do this be sure
to keep it light and you can even use a funny thumbnail
image to hook the lead. To make these you can involve
your pets, make use of gifs, and much more! The point
of this email is just to send them a gentle reminder and
add a little touch of humor. With lemlist, it will only take
you a couple of minutes to add these to your
campaigns!
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Networking email after no reply
This email template shows how you can send custom
messages and respect their busy schedules at the
same time. The most impressive part of this is that it’s a
follow-up, which usually has fewer replies than your
initial email.
To be able to use this strategy, you ought to
understand your prospects’ challenges and business
ambitions. Remember, personalization without
relevancy doesn’t mean a thing.
On top of that, it’s also important to connect all the
emails in your sequence so they don’t feel boring or
repetitive. Even if you’re not adding anything new,
which you could btw, use power words and focus on
the language your prospects use. It should be simple
and easy to understand.
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86%
open rate
71%
reply rate
Subject line: *keep the same as the first email
Hi Ilya,
Not sure if you've seen my last email, but I'm going to make this one super
quick in order not to waste your time.
I'm 100% confident that the collaboration between Aircall and lemlist is a
match made in heaven. Here's why...
We both obsessed with producing ACTIONABLE content and have strong
distribution networks that perfectly compliment each other.
Plus, all indicators suggest that once we release it, it's going to be a major hit,
and it will bring us a lot of attention.
Let me know Ilya as I'm super interested to hear your thoughts.
Stay safe,
Lucille
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Be genuine
Creating unique follow-ups for all leads doesn’t have to be
too complex. Use your CSV file to add custom tags for the
second email before you even send a campaign. This can be
a summary of the pitch in the first email or you can
reference their recent activity on Social Media to make the
follow-up even more unique.
Add facts
In this case, Lucille highlighted why the collaboration would
be good for both parties, but you can even personalize this
to each lead by stating how specifically it could help. This
will really make your pitch gold!
Rephrasing your previous email
It's not always necessary to ask your prospect to go back
and read the first email. Sometimes, you can give them a
quick summary that’s written in a dierent way. Plus, you
respect your prospect’s time and make their life easier as
a result.
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The last follow-up email
There are many reasons why someone might not respond
to your emails. They could be on vacation, haven’t had
time, or their inbox was too crowded at the time. Another
possibility is that this prospect might not be the right
person to talk to.
A solid tactic to use for your last follow-up email is to ask if
they are the right person to contact! This will either invoke
the person to respond with the right person to contact, or
just to confirm that they are in fact the right person but
they were too busy before.
Another nice thing to add to your last follow-up email is
the “I won’t be sending any more emails” line. This is
helpful so it doesn’t seem like you are trying to pester
them, and also because if they had any intention of
responding but haven’t been able to, they will do so now.
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8%
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Subject line: *keep the same as the first email
Hey Laura,
Apologies for bombarding your inbox like this. It seems like
you're not the right person to talk to about content marketing.
Is there any chance you can tell me who's in charge of
distributing content and making sure it reaches your target
audience?
Oh, whatever happens, I won't be sending you any more emails...
don't worry.
Thanks a lot!
Anaelle
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If you are reaching out to decision makers
It can be hard to find exactly who you need to contact, so
using this template can come in handy when you want to
verify that you have reached the right person. Also, if
someone does respond with someone else to contact, be
sure to thank them and also mention this person to the
decision maker you need to contact.
Approach the subject with the right tone
There is a huge dierence between asking to “speak to
the manager” and verifying that someone is the right
person to talk to. To give you a better idea of how to reach
this tone, imagine you are writing a message to one of
your colleagues asking if they handle a certain project or
if it’s someone else on the team.
Add some humor
There are dozens of gifs and memes out there that you
can add to increase your response rate to this one. Of
course, you can also create your own funny image with
lemlist too. Remember, outreach doesn’t need to be
boring!
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COLD EMAIL MARKETING
Grow your community
So, I thought you might be interested in
joining the fastest growing sales &
growth oriented community.
It’s called The Sales Automation Family
(14,000+ members).
It’s a place to:
1. Share & find cool growth tactics
2. Discuss new trends
3. Have fun 🤙
Hope to see you there!
Ilya (it’s like William but shorter, I know I
have a weird name)
Heyo {FirstName},
Ahaha, I’m just kidding Ted. 😂
I bumped into your LinkedIn profile
recently (thanks for accepting my
connection request, btw) and was
quite impressed with what you and
Weglot have been up to.
Ilya killed this campaign with a combo of outreach
automation and personalization!
Similar to the last example, Ilya tried to create a
touchpoint before sending out his cold email
campaign. He created a target persona, used
LinkedIn search filters to create a list of prospects
who matched this persona, and then used a
multichannel sequence to send them an invitation
to connect. Then he went in with this email to
invite them to his group. Because of the work he
already did to target the recipients he didn’t need
to add too many benefits since they were people
he already knew would be interested in the group.
He added to this by personalizing his message! He
added the first name, company logo, and website
screenshot of the lead. The image itself is
positioned higher in the email to capture
prospects’ attention and motivate them to read the
entire email.
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open rate
26%
reply rate
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Boost your networking results
The tactics and research used in this campaign would fit
perfectly with a networking campaign. For example, if
you want to network with other growth/marketing/sales
managers, all you need to do is determine your specific
target, use the LinkedIn search tool to find a list of
prospects, and import this list to lemlist to automate
viewing their profile, sending an invite, and starting an
email sequence to invite them for a coee chat. Could it
be any easier?
Target your image based the lead type
This kind of campaign works like magic for all types of
companies, but because of the website screenshot, it can
be even better for startups or entrepreneurs. If you want
to reach out to people from larger companies you might
consider replacing the website screenshot with a
screenshot of their LinkedIn profile. This way you are
making more of a personal connection with them and
help you to start building your relationship, which will
later lead you to sales.
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Invite guests to your podcast
Why did this template work?
This email starts out with an icebreaker
that is personalized for every lead’s
business. It helps tune down your sales
intentions and focus on starting a
conversation on a topic that’s relevant
to your prospect.
When transitioning to the sales pitch,
this email captures interest by
mentioning how the lead compares to
their competitors on Google, complete
with a personalized image.
Then it shows them the promised land
by explaining how they can put their
coee shop on top and even links a
plan so they know he is serious.
It finishes with a CTA that clearly states
the next steps, a call, and asks if they
are interested with a Yes/No, which can
boost response rates!
Subject line: Interview invite
Hi John,
While interviewing Morgan Ingram, he told me I absolutely have to get in
touch with you and bring you as one of my next guests. Plus, I just finished
watching your recent video on prospecting in the time of a global pandemic,
and it just adds to all of that.
Two months ago, I've started this live webinar series to provide super
actionable sales and growth advice to the viewers. So far we've interviewed
some great guests like Aaron Ross, Morgan Ingram, Anthony Iannarino, Jill
Rowley, etc. I’d be honored to add you to the list.
I think it would be cool to focus this episode on mid- and bottom-funnel
stages and boil down through all the details there. Leave the audience with
super actionable advice.
Here's why it can be fun for you John:
Hosted in the biggest sales automation community (6K+
members)
The episode will be distributed across our Social Media
profiles (30K+ followers, 1M views on avg)
Access to our 20K newsletter subscribers
Our audience mostly operates in Sales, Marketing and
Growth
For credibility and references…
Just so you know I'm no blog reader, but a result-oriented
entrepreneur 😎
My LinkedIn profile (link), the company I founded (link) and
2020 scoreboard (link)
If you're interested, we can jump on a quick call where I'll share the
entire interview plan with you.
You game?
Take care,
Guillaume
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Why did this template work?
Introducing our famous Tiramisu cold email tactic, because it’s cold, but sweet just like delicious Tiramisu.
It relies upon a high level of text personalization, and Guillaume added even more value by stating what was in it for them, and
then showed his credibility so they knew he meant business. In essence, it’s more than just a webinar or podcast invitation. This
worked like magic for high-profile guests like Rand Fishkin, Aaron Ross, Tim Soulo, Becc Holland, John Barrows, Jill Rowley, etc.
The two tiramisu tags have very important missions. One to captivate the lead with a hyper-personalized intro, and the next to add
an idea he has for the webinar featuring this specific lead. Once the lead was hooked, the template also lists all the benefits they
would get. As the cherry on the top, the final paragraph was for building credibility and outlining the next steps. No wonder the
reply rate was so high!
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reply rate
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Use it for sales prospecting
This is a networking campaign, but it has many other uses!
For instance, the tiramisu tactic always kills in sales
campaigns because of its level of personalization. If you do
this, you might want to take out the bulleted list of benefits
and simply add a short value statement to get them hooked
and you can even tailor this to them. Of course, another
route to take for hyper-personalization is to add a custom
picture or video as well to boost those click rates!
Podcast research trick
To come up with the intro sentences, what our team did is
they listened to a segment of a podcast our potential guest
did before and then identified a topic they cared about. Each
guest had a truly unique sentence.
Target the topics to their needs
Like with anything, you can add some more
personalization. For example, in the section where he lists
the potential topics they can discuss, you can personalize
this to include what you can talk about in relation to some
of their other work. To get even more specific, you can
look at their posting trends and make suggestions to help
them with a specific post.
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Get featured on other people’s podcasts
Why did this template work?
This email starts out with an icebreaker
that is personalized for every lead’s
business. It helps tune down your sales
intentions and focus on starting a
conversation on a topic that’s relevant
to your prospect.
When transitioning to the sales pitch,
this email captures interest by
mentioning how the lead compares to
their competitors on Google, complete
with a personalized image.
Then it shows them the promised land
by explaining how they can put their
coee shop on top and even links a
plan so they know he is serious.
It finishes with a CTA that clearly states
the next steps, a call, and asks if they
are interested with a Yes/No, which can
boost response rates!
Subject line: I’ve Got a Story for You
Hi Sarah,
My name is Guillaume and I’m the CEO and Co-Founder of lemlist.
I’ve listened to a few episodes on your podcast and I think you guys are
doing some fantastic work.
I listened to an episode you did with XY. I loved the part where you talked
about Facebook Ads, shared some cool A/B test experiments and tear
down few example.
I’d love to be your guest on the show.
For the past 1.5 years, I've been building lemlist, an email outreach tool
based on dynamic personalization (text, images, videos, landing pages).
Our tool helps businesses get more replies to cold emails, and makes their
sales process far more contextual and human.
After listening to your work, I believe your audience might enjoy hearing
about my journey. My promise to you is that I'll share an honest and
practical story - signing 10k customers and growing 30% MoM in a vastly
competitive market.
Of course, there's a lot of other topics we could be talking about too:
1) How to make personalization and automation work together
2) Building a 2.5K community on Facebook and why that matters so
much
3) Leveraging LinkedIn for greater engagement and business growth
4) Bootstrapping your SaaS towards profit by focusing on Product and
Brand
For references and credibility, you can check my LinkedIn profile (link)
and an episode I did with Nathan Latka (link).
Anyways, would love to hear your ideas and would be thrilled to join
The Sales Guru Podcast. If you’re up for it, lemme know
Much love,
Guillaume
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On the other hand, we have the reverse technique too, how you can get featured on podcasts. This template is essentially a
reverse-engineered version of the last one, but with a little less personalization.
Guillaume starts out by introducing himself, which is also a bit of a statement of credibility, and immediately follows with
compliments about their podcast and a personalized statement about one of their episodes that he really listened to. Once he gets
their interest, he goes in with the sale. He adds even more credibility and mentions the multiple topics they can discuss in the
lead’s podcast. In this case interest + credibility is what led G to success!
This is a great strategy Guillaume and Vuk leveraged to build awareness in the early growth stages of lemlist. Connecting with
podcast hosts and delivering value to their audience is a tactic you can scale, measure, and create win-win scenarios by creating
content that inspires.
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open rate
38%
reply rate
Why did this template work?
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Connect your pitch to their audience
The key to reaching out to creators like journalists,
bloggers, and artists is to mention their work with real
examples and then go in with exactly how your proposal
fits for them and their audience. It does take a bit more
time, but your eort will pay o! There are too many
content creators out there, and the best ones make an
eort where it counts.
Reaching out to content creators
You can use this template whenever reaching out to
someone to ask to be featured! Whether it’s in an article,
YouTube video, podcast, newsletter, etc. this template
works great because of its structure.
Oering services
More specifically, this template would work really well
with services like personal branding. In this case, you
have two options with your tiramisu. You can either use
flattery, show your interest, and explain how you can
help, or with the problem/solution method. For the latter,
you would simply introduce how you know them, provide
examples of real problems they are facing, and show
them the golden bridge of how you can help solve their
problems.
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Business collaboration email
Subject line: Collaborate? 👊
Hi Jose,
Let me just say I’m a big fan of Dropcontact. Just so you know I genuinely think
that, I talked about how much I like your tool for good 15 minutes in this podcast
(link).
My name is Daria btw, Growth Marketer at lemlist. We’re a cold email tool that
helps you get more replies with dynamic personalization.
I'm writing this email to discuss a Dropcontact and lemlist potential integration.
We are seeing a huuuge market demand in our data and I have no doubt this
will end up being a major success if we make it happen.
I’d love it if we could get on a call and talk about establishing a win-win
partnership between our two companies. You game?
Let me know,
Daria
When creating a partnership, trust needs to exist. And what
better way to establish trust than with a genuine email from
the start. Plus, you want to identify your partners
strategically and keep the communication ecient. To quote
one famous book author, don’t make people think about
these things.
Daria started out strong by writing a statement that was
hyper-targeted to her lead and their work so they know she’s
serious about the oer.
Then she keeps it short and sweet by introducing lemlist, her
proposal for an integration, explains why they had this idea,
and a simple CTA to test the water on how they feel.
She doesn’t go into detail about what it would entail or the
benefits because she really just wants to test how they feel
about this idea. Straight, simple, and to the point.
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sent
90%
open rate
50%
reply rate
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Get straight to the point
In this case, the template was used specifically to reach out to
people for integrations, but you can use it for any type of
collaboration you want. For example, you could also use this
template when contacting people for joint campaigns on
social media or for targeted content collaboration too.
Content centered around your lead
When doing a collaboration you need to not only show you
know the lead, but also spell out the win-win relationship
you are creating. There shouldn’t be any confusion!
Add proof to your argument
Speaking of facts, you can add them to this email! Daria
stated that there was a need for this integration, but you
can add to this by showing real examples of users asking
for an integration like this one, or better yet, this one by
name. It’s always best to show that you aren’t just
coming with empty promises, but have the cold hard facts
ready to show them.
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Influencer outreach
Subject line: Dnevnik Vina wants Marija
Hey Marija,
We hope you’re well in these crazy times.
Quick question for you. We’re throwing away what we think is going to
be the coolest wine giveaway in our country.
Therefore, we wanna connect and collaborate with true and cool wine
fans.
Don’t want to bother you with a long email. If this sounds interesting,
let us know.
Your true Insta fans,
Vuk
Hyper-targeting! This campaign was created by Vuk
when he was reaching out to influencers to promote a
giveaway for his local vlog.
If you look at the stats you can see the campaign was
only sent to 12 influencers. That’s because instead of
adding a lot of custom tags and icebreakers, he relies
on the rapport that he previously built by connecting
with them on Instagram.
He had already been following and interacting with
their posts before even reaching out to them, so when
they saw the message they knew it was made for
them.
To back this up even more, Vuk only reached out to
influencers that he knew would be interested in his
oer. As you can see, this paid o. Every lead that
opened the email responded!
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67%
open rate
67%
reply rate
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Reach out to people you’re connected with
This template works its magic when reaching out to people
with whom you have already established a relationship with.
Of course, you can use it for cold outreach as well, but keep in
mind the former. It doesn’t need to be a lot of interactions or
the best quality ones, but just so long as they can recognize
your name or at least be able to go back and see your
previous interactions.
Share your content
This one would be great to use when reaching out to
journalists to share a story. If you have spoken to the
journalist or shared other stories in the past, you can write
an email very similar to Vuk’s. No need to be more specific
because they know you well enough. In this case, you can
either share your story directly in the email or ask them if
they are interested first, this will depend on your
relationship and the context!
Add personalization as needed
If you haven’t built that strong of a relationship with
them, you will need to add a bit more personalization. In
this case, you want to group your journalists into dierent
campaigns based on subjects they write about or use
additional customized tags to mention this. Either way,
you need to make sure they know why you are reaching
out to them in particular and how this can help their
audience.
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LINK BUILDING TEMPLATES
Human approach to blogger outreach
I was wondering if you would be interested in a
little content collaboration.
For example, this relevant page on our recently
launched Cold Email Hub (link) can be a great
source for your audience. Don't you think? In
return, I’m happy to oer you anything from
the following:
- 100,000 more views on LinkedIn
- backlink in return
- feature your cold email template in our hub
- my eternal gratitude
- picture of happy Lara smiling (I think this is
the best option) 😅
Cheers and hope we talk soon,
Daria
The link building market is extremely challenging,
especially when using cold emails. The only way
to succeed is by building a meaningful network
and allowing for both sides to win. And to
accomplish that, your best bet is human and
original email outreach.
Daria also used a personalized image with her dog
to add a human touch and evoke emotion in her
outreach. This always works well, because I mean
who can resist a cute puppy?
The next great thing about this email is how she
phrases the backlink exchange as a collaboration.
Sometimes it’s hard to see a win-win situation,
and Daria pointed this out very clearly for her lead.
Then she goes in with a list of benefits for the lead
that adds personalization and humor, is there a
better combination out there? The reason why this
works is because you're positioning an email
exchange as a conversation, rather than you
asking. When you just ask, you lose all the
leverage.
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Subject line: Quick question about your article
on G2
Hi Kevin 👋 - this is Daria, I'm Head of content at
lemlist.
Although this is just going to be asking for a
backlink exchange on G2's blog, I’m gonna do
that with a little twist ;)
Together with my dog, we saw your post and
thought to reach-out.
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Show them the value
Another level of personalization you can add is with the
win-win situation. In some cases you might want to
hyper-personalize these for each of your leads! To do this
you can explain in depth why the article you want to link
fits perfectly with their article. Then, you can go in with
personalized info about how it can help this specific lead.
Use for your networking campaigns
Don’t think this template can only be used for backlinks!
You can modify it any way you want. For example, if you
are networking and want to reach out to someone for a
coee call, why not use these tactics?
Add personalization
This template requires very little extra personalization.
There is a ton of room for you to add to this and
personalize it according to your needs. For example, in
the intro, you can also talk a bit about the lead and
mention how you are a fan of their previous work and cite
several articles they have written. Or you can even add a
custom image that is personalized to your lead using their
name, LinkedIn profile picture, a screenshot of their
website, and more. Check out our tutorial to see how it
works.
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Sharing content with journalists
Personalization! Briana started out with a
subject line that would grab the lead’s attention
while also giving them a relevant picture of
what the email contains. No clickbait here.
Then she goes in with the tiramisu tags to
personalize the message to each of her leads.
The first one is all about flattering the lead to
hook them to keep reading on.
Then she explains the point of her email in a
light way, to share an article, and sandwiches
that with another tiramisu tag that mentions the
idea behind the article and why it’s a perfect fit
for this specific author.
To top this email o she ends with a PS that
establishes credibility with links to the
backstory and info about the company. In this
case flattery + value for lead + credibility =
articles being published.
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open rate
27%
reply rate
Subject line: David, I have a story for you!
Hi David,
I love the articles you share on Crunchbase about funding and startups, specifically
the "Startups To Watch" column. It helps us learn from their example and keeps us
motivated here at lemlist!
Anyways, based on your previous work I'd say you're a person who loves a good
story. I've got one for you.
We are looking to share our story about why we said NO to a $30M investment oer,
half of which was in cash out for our 3 co-founders.
I think this story would be a great fit for Crunchbase considering your recent posts
about where VCs are putting their money and the latest funding news!
This is where we need your help. Our founder, Guillaume Moubeche, wants to share
our story with your audience so that we can inspire and help more entrepreneurs
succeed.
What do you think...can I send it over to you? Let me know your thoughts.
PS: If you want to see the main takeaways from the process, feel free to look at the
deck + a short overview of who we are.
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Personalization hack
Speaking of changing it up, you can also test out adding a
personalized video instead of all of this text. Publications are
used to getting requests for guest posts, and a video will set
you apart! Using lemlist you can even create a personalized
landing page that is connected with slack so they can just
respond through a chat bot on your landing page and you’ll
be instantly notified. Talk about ease 😎
Modify it according to your relationship
This template goes over like gangbusters with publishers!
They love it when you are very specific and target them
based on the type of content they normally produce. But if
you have already established relationships with several
publications and just need to send out feelers, you might
want to change the template up a bit.
Keep it concise but interesting
In this case, you can definitely make it shorter. Instead of
working so much to flatter them, go straight to the point.
For example, something along the lines of “Hey
{{firstName}}, how are things going at
{{publicationName}}? {{tiramisu}}, anyways, I have
another article for you, this time about {{articleTopic}}, let
me know if it works for you to publish or if you’d like me
to change a few things up.” and your tiramisu can be
about the latest happenings with the publication or even
with your contact in particular.
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Broken link building
A broken link building strategy is far from new. If you are in the
backlink business, every blog recommends using this strategy.
However, what we’ve discovered is that it tends to work even
better if you have somewhat of a solid reputation as a writer or
you’re already connected to the people you’re reaching out to.
As for the template itself, it’s super simple! For this specific
campaign, Ilya spent a good amount of time targeting his leads
so he knew they were more likely to be interested in his oer.
We all get those emails asking for a backlink to something that
doesn’t even remotely fit our work, don’t fall prey to sending
backlink requests to anyone and everyone!
The first step was targeting his leads, so he used SEO tools like
Ahrefs to find targeted broken links in the lead’s content. The
rest came easily, he simply stated the error, and then suggested
one of his blog articles that fit the best as a replacement for the
dead URL. All the lead had to do is simply copy the backlink into
the article, how much easier can it get?
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open rate
58%
reply rate
Subject line: Small issue on your blog Josh
Hi Josh,
I was doing research that led me to your "XYZ article" page, where I noticed a
dead link.
Specifically:
URL: www.example.com/blog
Anchor: Example anchor
Dead URL: www.deadlink.com
Fixing these things is far from an exciting task, but I assume you want this taken
care of. If so, may I throw in a solid replacement link for consideration...
URL: https://blog.lemlist.com/how-to-send-cold-emails/
Title: How to send a cold email?
Stay golden,
Ilya
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Target your leads
Like we said, you shouldn’t be sending out these requests
to anyone. You can, but you won’t get near the same
results. The secret behind Ilya’s success was targeting his
leads to people he know would be interested in changing
the link and that the proposed link fits with. Then he
makes it easy by giving them the switch.
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Make it easy for your lead
Maintaining the idea of simplicity, consider pointing out
the exact part of the article that would be a good place to
add your backlink! This can work wonders when paired
with the win-win sell because you are essentially just
providing pure benefits and doing the dirty work for them.
What is better?
Use tools to your advantage
If you’re already using tools like Ahrefs and
SEMrush, take advantage of their full
capabilities! There is so much you can use these
tools for that will help you target your leads and
provide quality cold email personalization. Next
time you’re logged in, take another look at all of
its capabilities.
How can you use this?
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Claiming unlinked mentions
Another well-known strategy in the link building world.
In this email, we were reaching out to people that had
already mentioned lemlist on their website and were
just asking them to link the mention back to our
website. His key to success was the timing of this
email!
Instead of waiting until it is convenient to draft an
email, you can prep your template beforehand and
then set it up as soon as you’re notified that your
company was mentioned in an article.
Google Alerts is a free option, but you have paid tools
that are more robust to leverage here.
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100%
open rate
85%
reply rate
Subject line: Thanks for mentioning lemlist
Hi Phantombuster team,
I wanted to reach out and say I'm super grateful about you
mentioning lemlist in the "5 LinkedIn Flows You Have To Try".
As you know, we're hustling hard to grow our business and it
would mean a world to us if you could add a link back to our site.
Thanks again for the shout out and wish you nothing but the
best!
See you down the road,
Lucille
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Timing is everything
When crafting an email like this, whether it be for working
on a backlink or sharing a story, you need to make sure that
you are reaching out at the right moment for your lead. All
you have to do is set up google alerts any time your
company name is mentioned, and immediately reach out to
your lead.
Create a win-win relationship
The last thing you can add is what you are willing to oer
in return. Whether it be a backlink to their site, help with
their LinkedIn strategy, organizing an interview for them,
etc. This secures that win-win relationship we mentioned
before. Imagine sharing this article on one of your
channels and sending some trac their way prior to
reaching out. This type of cold email usually ends in little
negotiation.
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Keep track of your leads
If you have a campaign already set up for these
circumstances then all you’ll have to do is add the name
of your lead or company in your CSV file along with the
article that was mentioned and import into lemlist and
you are ready to roll. A backlink hack in less than a
minute!
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RECRUITING TEMPLATES
Initial recruiting email
Subject line: lemlist looking to bring Lucille 📰
Hi Lucille,
My name is Guillaume and I'm looking for the new Creative Marketing Manager
at lemlist.
Your work on X project looks really impressive and as such it drew our
attention. As a matter of fact, we're currently working on a similar project at our
company where the challenge is rank our French content high and generate
organic leads in the long run.
We feel that you're the perfect person to join our team and help us achieve
this.
If you're interested, I could send over the details of the job?
Let me know,
Guillaume
This one is very similar to the last template, but with a bit of a
twist.
The key in this template is the level of personalization. It started
out with a clear subject line and intro so the prospect knows
exactly why they are contacting them. This tactic should be used
not for cold targeting, but for when you have a specific person in
mind that you really want. Hence why more research is needed
and why the email goes deeper into the challenges of the role.
You already kind of qualified the candidate, you just want to
confirm your expectations and see if they are interested in a
respectful and ecient way.
The template uses custom tags to specifically identify projects
they are working on, and highlight how they could help the new
company, should they decide to switch.
The real seller of this email is that he simply asks if they want to
find out more info about the job, no pressure. This can also lead
to building relationships, even if they aren’t interested in working
for him.
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Put your lead on a pedestal
Again, the key to this email is highlighting the lead and how
interested you are in them. They have the opportunity to
work with other companies, start their own projects, or even
grow at their current company, so why should they want to
come work for you instead? You need to make them feel
wanted in your approach so they know you are serious.
Modify the template to fit your needs
This is a basic interview invite template that you can use as
a starting point and build from there. For example, you can
use the ideas from this one to create a recommendation
template. Now and then you get current employees to
recommend other rock stars, so you should bring this up in
your email. You can use custom variables to say who
mentioned them and why you are interested in their work.
Stand out from the crowd
You can also take advantage of lemlist’s features to add a
personalized video to your recruiting template. Instead of
just sending a link to the job application you can add the
link along with a thumbnail leading to a personalized
landing page for each prospect, complete with a video
introducing yourself and the company, and then a
calendar link so the prospect can directly book an
interview with you.
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Interview invitation email
Subject line: We want you at Apple
Hey Denis,
Apple is looking to hire a UX Designer and we've set our eyes on you.
Your LinkedIn profile shows an impressive track record in creating loveable and
seamless experiences in the app world. All the reasons why we would want
someone like you to join our team.
If interested, you can see all the details about the role here.
We'd definitely like to get to know you, no strings attached.
Let me know if you're up for it?
Take care,
Tim
When recruiting it’s always important to show the candidate
you really want them! The time has come to change those
generic messages we receive on LinkedIn in which they tell us
we should click on a link and apply.
This example starts out with a great subject line that will for
sure boost your open rate. It also highlights info about the
prospect and uses custom variables to show they’ve done
their research on the candidate.
They back this up with info about the job role so the
candidate can do their own research if they are interested.
Finally, they seal the deal with an invitation for a no-pressure
interview which is guaranteed to boost response rates.
At the end of the day, it’s how “cold recruiting” should feel.
Like a conversation, matching prospect’s interests with the
right role, and not treating them in a generic way when they
reply. You can be ecient and kind at the same time while
ramping up your reply rate in the process.
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Genuine compliments
This is the key to making your email seem like it was
written specifically for a target and not just an email that
you can send to hundreds of candidates. Tim leveraged
the information on his candidate’s LinkedIn profile to show
them that he has seen their work and prove that is
genuinely interested in them.
Use social media
Sites like LinkedIn are a gold mine for creating
recruitment emails! Of course, you can look at a
candidate’s profile, which is essentially a resume, but you
can even check out their activity to get more information
about their daily activities or topics they are interested in.
lemlist chrome extension
If this sounds like a lot of work, don’t worry, we’ve got you
covered. Finding information about your lead and
uploading it to your campaign has never been easier!
With the lemlist chrome extension, all you have to do is
activate it, and your lead’s information will be uploaded.
You can even add to it by writing out your icebreaker as
you are viewing their profile. Then all you have to do is
press create and it imports to the campaign of your
choice. If you want to save time creating your custom
values check out our video that walks you through it!
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Hiring VPs and department heads
Subject line: Daniel at Tesla?
Hi Daniel,
I am currently on the hunt for a new Director of Marketing and Communications
and I think you’d be a great fit!
I saw your work on the brand positioning for Toyota and watched the execution
of your commercial plan at AB InBev. Great job increasing the revenue by 34%,
quite impressive!
Anyways, this job would be right up your alley. You would be focused on X, Y,
and Z, with competitive pay and attractive benefits. Are you interested in
learning more about the position?
I’d love to set up a quick call. Have a great day!
Briana
The right balance of an easy-going tone with
professional content.
They started right o the bat with a subject line
that is sure to grab attention, and an intro line to
explain what they are looking for. This ensures the
prospect will keep reading if this matches with
what they are searching for. Then they go in with a
custom tag to express their interest in the
potential candidate and exactly why they want to
work with them.
They add a bit of info about the job but not too
much because the point is to see if the lead is
interested in learning more. The CTA makes it easy
for the prospect to respond with a simple yes or
no.
They did all of this in a casual tone that makes this
message sound like reaching out to a colleague
and then finish it o with a fun picture to lighten
the mood.
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Matching the tone to your company
This template is a great one to use for general talent
searches because of how it maintains a professional feel
with a casual tone, but you can change this depending on
what is best for both your company and audience. For
instance, you can also make it more casual by adding
things like a P.S. and picture of the team.
Make your pitch dierent
You could also make a personalized video for your top
candidates! This option works so well because it sets your
company apart from the crowd, and gives them a chance
to book a meeting on your lemlist customized landing
page with your calendy integration. Easy to set up and
perfect for your potential candidates.
Share the best info for your lead
Another way you can modify this template is by changing
the job info that you give. You can leave out the job
information altogether or maybe include more details
about the role/company. This can even be personalized
depending on each candidate, i.e. mentioning the part of
the role or benefits that will appeal to each of your leads.
You might also want to consider adding a link to the
company careers page so they can check out your
company for themselves.
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Release the Kraken!
Below you’ll find some additional resources to use, should you need them:
Cold email guide for beginners
100+ cold email templates
How to do an audit of your email reputation
How to automatically warm up your domain
Why it’s critical to verify email addresses
How to find anyone’s email address
Best cold email subject lines
Best cold email intro lines
7 LinkedIn tips to target prospects like a pro
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