Developing A Thesis
Think of yourself as a member of a jury, listening to a lawyer who is presenting an opening argument.
You'll want to know very soon whether the lawyer believes the accused to be guilty or not guilty, and how
the lawyer plans to convince you. Readers of academic essays are like jury members: before they have
read too far, they want to know what the essay argues as well as how the writer plans to make the
argument. After reading your thesis statement, the reader should think, "This essay is going to try to
convince me of something. I'm not convinced yet, but I'm interested to see how I might be."
An effective thesis cannot be answered with a simple "yes" or "no." A thesis is not a topic; nor is it a fact;
nor is it an opinion. "Reasons for the fall of communism" is a topic. "Communism collapsed in Eastern
Europe" is a fact known by educated people. "The fall of communism is the best thing that ever happened
in Europe" is an opinion. (Superlatives like "the best" almost always lead to trouble. It's impossible to
weigh every "thing" that ever happened in Europe. And what about the fall of Hitler? Couldn't that be "the
best thing"?)
A good thesis has two parts. It should tell what you plan to argue, and it should "telegraph" how you plan
to argue—that is, what particular support for your claim is going where in your essay.
Steps in Constructing a Thesis
First, analyze your primary sources. Look for tension, interest, ambiguity, controversy, and/or
complication. Does the author contradict himself or herself? Is a point made and later reversed? What are
the deeper implications of the author's argument? Figuring out the why to one or more of these questions,
or to related questions, will put you on the path to developing a working thesis. (Without the why, you
probably have only come up with an observation—that there are, for instance, many different metaphors
in such-and-such a poem—which is not a thesis.)
Once you have a working thesis, write it down. There is nothing as frustrating as hitting on a great idea
for a thesis, then forgetting it when you lose concentration. And by writing down your thesis you will be
forced to think of it clearly, logically, and concisely. You probably will not be able to write out a final-
draft version of your thesis the first time you try, but you'll get yourself on the right track by writing down
what you have.
Keep your thesis prominent in your introduction. A good, standard place for your thesis statement is at
the end of an introductory paragraph, especially in shorter (5-15 page) essays. Readers are used to finding
theses there, so they automatically pay more attention when they read the last sentence of your
introduction. Although this is not required in all academic essays, it is a good rule of thumb.
Anticipate the counter-arguments. Once you have a working thesis, you should think about what might
be said against it. This will help you to refine your thesis, and it will also make you think of the arguments
that you'll need to refute later on in your essay. (Every argument has a counter-argument. If yours doesn't,
then it's not an argument—it may be a fact, or an opinion, but it is not an argument.)
Michael Dukakis lost the 1988 presidential election because he failed to campaign
vigorously after the Democratic National Convention.
This statement is on its way to being a thesis. However, it is too easy to imagine possible counter-
arguments. For example, a political observer might believe that Dukakis lost because he suffered from a
"soft-on-crime" image. If you complicate your thesis by anticipating the counter-argument, you'll
strengthen your argument, as shown in the sentence below.